This weekend’s Trifextra Challenge is to write a dialogue that is exactly 33 words long. Fortunately, I can add this entry to the piece I have been working on for the Trifecta Challenge. I will consider this as bonus-time on a painfully slow project. If you are wondering why I am only adding to this piece (let’s call it ‘SWC’) 333 words at a time, it’s because I am also writing another novel and making time to do both is difficult. This way I ensure that every week sees forward-movement in the story. It also keeps me from overwhelming myself and getting confused between the plots of both stories. Makes sense, right?
“Do tell!”
“Hell hath no fury, Alex. She spat so much venom. She was so wrapped up in insulting me that at times what she said didn’t make sense. She was truly malevolent.”
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February 4, 2013 at 2:26 PM
o.k. So I just went back and reread every entry from this story . I love it!
February 4, 2013 at 5:03 PM
Thanks Deana!
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February 3, 2013 at 6:05 PM
Wow, she sounds like fun. Or not.
February 4, 2013 at 9:12 AM
Fun like slamming the car door on your hand. LOL
February 3, 2013 at 2:13 PM
gotta love a piece with “malevolent” in it!
February 4, 2013 at 9:12 AM
Every time I use that word I think of the witch in Sleeping Beauty. Wasn’t her name Malevolence? Amazing name for a villainess!
February 3, 2013 at 5:50 AM
Now I want all the juicy details (:
February 4, 2013 at 7:58 AM
Eventually it will all come out.
February 2, 2013 at 9:32 PM
Nice dialogue! People like that are toxic – I avoid the venomous ones whenever possible
February 4, 2013 at 7:57 AM
Good policy.
February 2, 2013 at 2:59 PM
Well done! Makes me wonder what the second speaker is referring to.
February 2, 2013 at 4:28 PM
Guapamole, you have to read the last four weeks of the Trifecta challenge, if you haven’t yet.
February 2, 2013 at 1:03 PM
Interesting dialogue. Definitely want to read the whole piece.
February 2, 2013 at 4:27 PM
It’s all been on Trifecta. I think I need to step up the pace though. It’s frustratingly slow in it’s development.
February 2, 2013 at 11:59 AM
I love the visual behind “spat so much venom”. Chilling and awesome.
February 2, 2013 at 4:26 PM
Thanks, Corinne!
February 2, 2013 at 11:24 AM
Woman,thy name is …great way to take the story forward:-)
February 2, 2013 at 4:29 PM
Thank you! It was a relief to be able to squeeze in 33 more words… like cheating on a diet. Lol
February 2, 2013 at 10:40 PM
lol!Good parallel;-)
February 2, 2013 at 10:44 AM
Terrific!
February 2, 2013 at 4:30 PM
Thanks, Deana!