Every Monday morning, members of the Trifecta Writing Challenge are given a prompt. This week our prompt is the word bitch:
1) the female of the dog or some carnivorous animal;
2a) a lewd or immoral woman;
2b) a malicious, spiteful, or overbearing woman– sometimes used a generalized term of abuse;
3) something that is extremely difficult, objectionable, or unpleasant
Our responses must be between 33 and 333 words and must use the third definition of the word. We are allowed one entry into the challenge. Want to join the fun? Click on the link above and put your skills to the test. There are a few tough competitors in the challenge! Can you beat them? (No, I am not one of them.
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This week’s entry is a continuation of the story I began four weeks ago. If you’d like to catch up on week 1, week 2, and week 3, please do!
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The Outflow
“How are you and Steve doing, Sam?”
“Better than I ever thought was possible. We have been through so much together. There were lots of times I didn’t think we would be able to make it through the trials we were facing. What about you and Brian, Alex? How are you guys doing?” Sam seemed genuinely concerned about Alex.
“I guess we are doing okay. We’re still together, if that says anything.” Sam could tell by the expression on Alex’s face that there was more to the story than she presently knew.
“Alex, I know you are going through a really tough time… worse than I ever went through with Steve. I know that you are afraid to talk about it. You can trust me, Alex. I am not going to turn on you. I am your friend, and I will take care of you. I won’t force you to talk, but you need to, and I am here,” Sam assured Alex, as she put her hand over Alex’s.
Tears filled Alex’s eyes. She blinked rapidly to clear them, but only succeeded in forcing them down her cheeks. She wiped at them fiercely. “I am so sorry, Sam. I hate that I am so emotional. I wish I could just be stronger than I am. I would probably be able to handle this better if I wasn’t given to crying over every stupid, tiny thing.” Alex smiled, but it was a forced, shaky smile.
“Please trust me. You cannot do this alone.”
“I don’t know what to say, Sam. I can’t complain about what’s going on because I am the one to blame for it all. I really should have been smart enough to wait until I knew him better. I probably wouldn’t have made the choice to be with him if I’d seen who he really is. As if going through a divorce isn’t a bitch by itself, now I realize I am in love with a monster.” The tears began again.

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January 24, 2013 at 8:30 AM
Ooooh. That last line.
January 24, 2013 at 3:46 AM
Actually, you are totally one of them. If we gave out more than a top three, you’d have already been declared a winner, since you’ve been in our top 5 already. Keep writing. It’s coming.
January 24, 2013 at 7:56 AM
And if that day comes, I will wear the honor with pride.
January 23, 2013 at 8:19 PM
With finely-crafted pieces like this, you’re definitely one of the tough competitors! (:
January 23, 2013 at 8:57 PM
Awww, shucks.
January 23, 2013 at 10:35 AM
In love with a monster… not a great way to feel. Makes me want to give her a big old hug!
January 23, 2013 at 10:49 AM
I am sure she needs it, too!
January 22, 2013 at 2:43 PM
Your dialogue carries the story along nicely.
January 22, 2013 at 8:10 PM
Thanks, Kymm! Glad you’re reading.
January 22, 2013 at 9:24 AM
At least they are getting a divorce-the heart can heal if left alone..How well you write-love your style ,enjoyed this piece of the larger story very much:-)
January 22, 2013 at 11:05 AM
I appreciate your commentary on my pieces and I feel humbled that you enjoy reading them.
January 24, 2013 at 4:05 AM
Oh,its so well written that its a pure joy to read -)
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January 21, 2013 at 8:39 PM
Chilling ending. I think being in love with a monster is about as bad as it gets. This was an intriguing story. I was brought in from the first sentence and wasn’t disappointed. Good job!
January 21, 2013 at 6:24 PM
In love with a monster… if only we ladies were able to spot monsters more easily before they ensnared us. *sigh* Great story, love to see how it’s coming along…
January 21, 2013 at 8:12 PM
Some monsters wear very disarming masks
January 21, 2013 at 1:44 PM
This really touched me In ways I could never express. Great writing.
January 21, 2013 at 2:21 PM
Thanks Deana! If you have any advice, please let me know.
January 21, 2013 at 2:44 PM
I thought it was perfect!
January 21, 2013 at 2:46 PM
Thank you. I really enjoy your comments and I am so pleased that you read my entries.
January 21, 2013 at 1:26 PM
What I like about the whole series is that you are not rushing. Slowly, ever so slowly, you are adding layers of meaning to your character’s conversations. I’m still willing to read more so, keep up the good work and I’ll be back for Part #5, whenever you get it finished.
January 21, 2013 at 2:20 PM
Plan on next Monday. Writing two novels at once demands pacing one. It is almost painfully slow in it’s development, so my apologies. I always want to say more than I can in 333 words, but keeping a steady pace is keeping me from losing my mind! LOL
January 21, 2013 at 10:47 AM
I find it heartbreaking that Alex blames herself for what is happening. As if that is ever the case.
January 21, 2013 at 10:55 AM
From what I’ve read, it’s a common reaction.
January 21, 2013 at 8:54 AM
I love this story. You have a skill in bringing simple humanity to your words.
January 21, 2013 at 8:55 AM
Thank you Corinne! I appreciate you reading it. As it rolls on, will you give me honest feedback, when you see a need?