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Trifecta Challenge: Week 59

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Trifecta

The Trifecta Challenge this week is to write a piece between 33 and 333 words that uses the following definition of the word intention:

“a) what one intends to do or bring about; b) the object for which a prayer, mass or pious act is offered”

This piece is meant to be part of a larger fictional story I am working on and is a continuation from last week’s entry.

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Common Interests

“You know, this is never the way friends are supposed to meet,” Sam said as she blew the steam away from the rim of her coffee cup.  Alex, having made her delivery, was enjoying a nice Starbucks and a scone with Sam.  The delivery of the note had gone seamlessly.  To her relief, Deanna had given her a quizzical look and accepted the envelope with no argument and without opening it immediately.  Alex had a chance to slip between Deanna’s Ford Focus and a Nissan Frontier before further communication could occur.

“Well, we do all have something in common.  As a matter of fact, several of us have at least two things in common,” Alex pointed out.

“Well, other than the fact that we are all enjoying the castoffs of another woman, many members of the club are dealing with the never-ending drama of having been the other woman,” Sam agreed.

“We get a bad rep, you know.”

“Alex, keep in mind that for the most part, mistresses are given a bad reputation for a reason,” chided Sam.  “If you look at it from the point of view of the wife, you’ve swept in, offered her husband something she can’t, and then destroyed her marriage.”

‘Sam, when you met John was it your intention to cause upheaval?” asked Alex as she stuck a small bite of pastry into her mouth.

“Of course it wasn’t.  I have worked every day since trying to repair the damage.  Shelley and I went out for a drink the other night.  I think she is finally ready for a cease-fire.  Of course, that could also be because Natalie left a note on her doorstep three weeks ago.”

“Oh yeah!  Did she know it was from you?”

“Does it matter?  She has stopped the incessant texting, so it’s a vast improvement.”

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Author: UndercoverL

In order to protect myself and my right to tell the truth about certain people who bother the living schnizzle out of me, I choose to go by a clever pseudonym. You can also call me Natalie. It's not my name, but I wish it were.

29 thoughts on “Trifecta Challenge: Week 59

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  14. I like this, too! The premise is interesting, and the dialogue is very good. I want to read more. :-)

  15. Groucho Marx said he wouldn’t want to join any club that would have him as a member. Or something like that. Your story would make a good screenplay. Your dialog is great. And I can see these ladies gathering… for something.. good buildup. I want the next installment.

  16. Nice concept, I’ll have to go back and read the beginning. :)

  17. The dialogue in this piece is perfect.

  18. Nice bit of story telling here. I wanna read more!

  19. Great continuation. (:

  20. When do we get to see the next part, I want to know what happens.

  21. I am really enjoying how you tell a story. Well done. I look forward to reading more.

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